写作|如何写申请信(联考作文的思考)( 二 )


I would be very grateful if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your reply. (98词)
评讲:
自己评讲自己的作文 , 读者应该最能清楚我的写作过程了:
第一段:写作目的:一般用since…/knowing…的状语(从句)说明写信背景 , 然后就是写信目的 。 切记:一定要1-2句结束 , 不可超过两行 。
第二段:围绕“主题句+拓展”来写句子 , 句子的主语不能都是I , 要学会多变 。 另外一个牢记:我这样的理由是不是真的说服对方 , 而不是扯淡 , 让读者觉得非常无聊幼稚 。 譬如我说我有这样的经验 , 那就拓展一下我的经验能起到什么作用;我说我具备团队精神 , 那就拓展说明这样的品质会让我做到哪些事 。
有一个衡量标准:你就是把它翻译成汉语信 , 真的寄给学校俱乐部也能说得过去 。 你要记住你的读者是老师 , 他们希望你和老师就是平等交流 。
其它类似作文题:
假如你是李华 , 寒假在伦敦学习 , 得知伦敦市政府在社区招募防疫志愿者 。 请你用英文写一封电子邮件应聘 ,
内容包括:1. 写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情 。
注意:1. 词数80左右 2. 可适当增加细节 , 以使行文连贯
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student currently studying in London. Knowing that volunteers are wanted to fight against the virus, I am writing to apply to be one of them.
As a warm-hearted boy, I am always willing to help people in need. Besides, my good command of English and abundant relevant experience make me well suited to the job. If chosen as a volunteer, I will use my medical knowledge to appeal to local people to raise awareness of self-protection, such as washing hands regularly and wearing masks when going out.
Thank you for taking my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
( 2018年6月浙江高考真题 应聘信)
假如你是李华 , 你校英语协会招聘志愿者 , 接待来访的国外大学生 , 请你写信应聘 ,
内容包括:1. 口语能力;2.相关经验;3.应聘目的 。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节 , 以使行文连贯 。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the post of a volunteer which is advertised in the school newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me and I’m well qualified for the job.
First, with a good command of spoken English, it is easy for me to interact with foreign friends. Second, my previous experience about treating exchange students equips me with much knowledge about the cultural differences. Besides, I think it an excellent opportunity to broaden my horizons and improve my social skills.
I'd appreciate it if you could give me a chance. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua


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