科学出版社|又因为语言问题被退稿？快点开这篇干货！( 二 )

原句：

“Much interest has centered on the question of whether doping agents are important for the nanostructure of surfaces at high temperatures. This article will first review proposals for important single doping agents arising from studies of metal oxides, then review studies employing materials containing mixed agents. Doping agents thought to influence surface structures by affecting bulk properties will be considered in a following section”. (64 words)

修改后：

“Are doping agents important for the nanostructure of surfaces? Below we review proposals derived from single and mixed agents and agents affecting bulk properties.” (28 words)
化繁为简之后，整篇文章看起来更加流畅易懂，不要考验期刊编辑的耐心！
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语法：文章中的时态语态

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Introduction

已经被证实过的事实→ 一般现在时

Proteomics provides important information for understanding drug design.

之前已经做过的研究→ 现在完成时，被动语态

Few experiments have been carried out to discover ….
Methods

在这项研究中所做的工作的描述→一般过去时，被动语态

The composition of the sample was determinedusing standard procedures.
Results

描述获得的研究结果→一般过去时

After inhibition by ABC enzymes, the cell activity diminished in both groups.

参考图表、数据图→一般现在时

Table 7 【科学出版社|又因为语言问题被退稿？快点开这篇干货！】showsthe results of the experiments
Discussion

解释结果，陈述一般事实→一般现在时

Removing the source negatively affectsthe resistance to PKS.

描述过去的研究发现→一般过去时
当前的研究事实→一般现在时

Acidic content did not change the sensitivity of the materials and this presents a new explanation.
其实我们从开始学英语的时候就在学习语法，但在写文章时还是会用错，怎么办呢？多读一些文章，着重学习语法，而不是文章内容。
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